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I woke up scared to a world was grey
From underneath my door
My blood was crawling away
And laughters I heard so long ago
Came back tonight said don't let go
There is still hope that lies ahead

-who are you talking to son?
-no one it's all in my head
  I'll shed the last tear and I'll go to bed
  I'll have one last hug before I'm dead
She covered me and sang the last lullaby
I made believe that I won't cry
She said goodnight
I said goodbye

But will the pain end up tonight
And can their darkness beat my light
Innocence burning in my heart
Questions burning in my mind
Is it strength to face the reaper?
Or is it strength to suicide?
I wrote this poem, bout how happiness is always stronger than sorrow, and no matter how much the darkness takes over your life, you can always find enough reasons to live and to smile
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TearsOfTheAmaranth Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Very beautiful, well written :nod:
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GhaithXNite Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
aww thank you so much :tighthug:
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TearsOfTheAmaranth Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome :D
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Felicia-Neko Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
that is very true...
I love it and it gave me strenght to stay strong :)
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GhaithXNite Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
well that's what it's all about
i'm glad it made you strong :hug:
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Felicia-Neko Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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SHM-Shocker Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2011
Very, very well written. The tone and emotion of the poetry compliment each other significantly. The reader can FEEL the pain of the writer and the word choices help the flow and togetherness of it. I love it, well done. <333
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GhaithXNite Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
oh thank you so much
i was really happy reading your comment
thank you so much :hug:
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CheetahQueen Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
i really love it :)
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GhaithXNite Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
aww thank you so much
it means alot to me that you did :hug:
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